Day 7 of 30 Paintings in 30 days

Day 7 of 30 paintings in 30 days - Nocita from a PMP photo - oil pastel on Canson Mi-Teintes paper...Hmmm...
Not too happy with this one. I think I went too detailed with her scarf and it overpowers her...I want to thank Pat Isaac for her recommendation to tone down the whites in her scarf. I think it helped. I like it much better now ;) See before and after below.

 

  BEFORE: Nocita - oil pastel on Canson Mi-Teintes paper (9x12 inches) 

BEFORE: Nocita - oil pastel on Canson Mi-Teintes paper (9x12 inches) 

  AFTER: Nocita - oil pastel on Canson Mi-Teintes paper (9x12 inches) 

AFTER: Nocita - oil pastel on Canson Mi-Teintes paper (9x12 inches) 

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